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Outside the world is serene
Lush trees waving in the wind
Children playing and birds chirping
The smell of freshly mown lawns

Inside the chaos that no one sees
The flaming sky and charred ground
Tormented by my echoing thoughts
Enslaved by my heart's desire

My heart is everything
It is what makes me unique
I am just another hopeless romantic
But does that make me weak?

This cruel taskmaster
With the whip leaving its mark
Each lash opening up my feelings
Screaming them out into the dark

I turn my head and look
To identify this torturer
My eyes opening in shock
As I behold a reflection of myself

That evil grin on my face
Knowing the pain that I put myself through
Wishing for things just to go right
To be numb to these feelings

The crack of the whip
Then I scream out "I love her"
The tyrant laughing in my face
Telling me I am not good enough

These chains are branded onto me
Only to be freed by your love
I hang my head down
As the thunderous world echoes in my head

Repeating those words
Again and again to myself
Waiting for the day
That you will come to save me

To hold each other close
So I can tell you to your face
With all the love in my heart
That I love you
©2008-2009 ~ShadowAaronX
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Just another poem I wrote last night while sitting in bed. Tell me what you think.
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Woah, nice! Why were you asking for my help again?

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
rofl because I suck at writing poetry?

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Love is giving someone the power to destroy you.
But trusting them not to.

Courage imperiles life, just as fear protects it.
pfft if you suck I suck. And I got people saying I don't for whatever reason =p

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
Lol I don't think mine are good, they just seem like stupid ramblings =P

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Love is giving someone the power to destroy you.
But trusting them not to.

Courage imperiles life, just as fear protects it.
I like your poems.. I really like this one Aaron.. Lots of great imagery as usual.. Lots of feeling in there too.. I hope you are freed soon..
thanks, it means alot coming from you =).
Hopefully I will be soon.

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Love is giving someone the power to destroy you.
But trusting them not to.

Courage imperiles life, just as fear protects it.
wow.
just beautiful.
tis the torture of the heart, love. i know.
amazing poetry once more!

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I adore the sound of a bendy straw when you stretch it out to put it in your drink, to MAKE it bendy.

It's the little things in life that make me happy. :)

A werewolf too. <3
Mine are thought out ramblings :D

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
lol, mine are all just whatever pops into my head when I am feeling these ways =P

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Love is giving someone the power to destroy you.
But trusting them not to.

Courage imperiles life, just as fear protects it.
Realistically, my poems are about my dreams/memories/observations/feelings.

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.

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